There is definitely a potential here. You choice one of the darkest themes to explore and I was very invested in the story. The gameplay is rough around the edges, but nothing that can't be fixed with a simple update. Overall, I think you can make a decent 20-30 minute game with a good script, some animations and transitions with the addition of sound effects and ambience.
Best of luck in game development friend! You can do it, I believe in that.
hey nice game! only one thing at the moment where billy says "that was yummy mom!" and mom turns around for some reason it doesn't continue dialogue? also R.I.P family cat god bless you
just learned today that I needed to click on the mother to continue dialogue which is weird because I'm used to clicking anywhere and it continues but not in this game maybe what you can do is that you can make it so that when I press spacebar it continues dialogue so that it doesn't confuse the people that plays your games but for the ending it is kinda awkward since it's just cut to next scene which has no text except for a red mini text saying esc to exit which like I said in the previous project of yours that you should make text more bigger and diff font so that the people who plays your games can read it better but aye since you're burned out imma let it slide overall 8/10 I like the game and the plot twist, really can't call this horror since there is no scares it's just some story game but yeah keep it up murderman97
I'm glad you figured it out the horror aspect comes from the fact that stuff like this happens all over the world with kids' mothers and fathers a like that's the horror of this game.
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Great story! this was a really good game 😊
A lot to unpack here.
There is definitely a potential here. You choice one of the darkest themes to explore and I was very invested in the story. The gameplay is rough around the edges, but nothing that can't be fixed with a simple update. Overall, I think you can make a decent 20-30 minute game with a good script, some animations and transitions with the addition of sound effects and ambience.
Best of luck in game development friend! You can do it, I believe in that.
hey nice game! only one thing at the moment where billy says "that was yummy mom!" and mom turns around for some reason it doesn't continue dialogue? also R.I.P family cat god bless you
weird it did for me could be an issue with your pc idk I'll check it out.
just learned today that I needed to click on the mother to continue dialogue which is weird because I'm used to clicking anywhere and it continues but not in this game maybe what you can do is that you can make it so that when I press spacebar it continues dialogue so that it doesn't confuse the people that plays your games but for the ending it is kinda awkward since it's just cut to next scene which has no text except for a red mini text saying esc to exit which like I said in the previous project of yours that you should make text more bigger and diff font so that the people who plays your games can read it better but aye since you're burned out imma let it slide overall 8/10 I like the game and the plot twist, really can't call this horror since there is no scares it's just some story game but yeah keep it up murderman97
I'm glad you figured it out the horror aspect comes from the fact that stuff like this happens all over the world with kids' mothers and fathers a like that's the horror of this game.
Also, it's not supposed to be a white screen its suppose it be the credits so weird??
yeah kinda weird maybe check on that god bless u murderman